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@nicollettenikki thanks so much! i really went outside my usual style with this one, i think this was my first real poem, so i'm glad you thought it was good =D
I loved that this is so storytelling meets poetry. Its very gripping from the mysteries starting to the ending of it. Its a thrilling story and its written superbly.