District 1 is Hungry(ON HOLD!)

11 Part Story 1.4K Reads 42 Votes
;) By natalieangelos Updated 3 years ago
You may think the district one tributes are deadly, but follow Glimmer from her point of view. Find out who she is. Find out who Marvel is. Their training to win these games. Experience Glimmer's death from her view. Thee tracker jackers deadly poison stings. Feel her pain like you were her. Marvel's pain when the sharp arrow goes throw his chest. But killing Rue at the same time. The deadly expressions they have. Join them. Follow them. And die with them.
This is a really good start, and I'm a pretty big fan of the Hunger Games. Just revise this because there are some spelling mistakes, and grammar mistakes. The ending felt a little rushed to me because you're squishing info. at the last second which is not a good thing. You should slow the pace a little, and try to portray the emotions a little more because I didn't feel it. I like your idea of writing about Glimmer instead of the overused Katniss fan fics. Overall, it's a good start, and it seems promising. :)
This is a really good start, and I'm a pretty big fan of the Hunger Games. Just revise this because there are some spelling mistakes, and grammar mistakes. The ending felt a little rushed to me because you're squishing info. at the last second which is not a good thing. You should slow the pace a little, and try to portray the emotions a little more because I didn't feel it. I like your idea of writing about Glimmer instead of the overused Katniss fan fics. Overall, it's a good start, and it seems promising. :)
This is a really good start, and I'm a pretty big fan of the Hunger Games. Just revise this because there are some spelling mistakes, and grammar mistakes. The ending felt a little rushed to me because you're squishing info. at the last second which is not a good thing. You should slow the pace a little, and try to portray the emotions a little more because I didn't feel it. I like your idea of writing about Glimmer instead of the overused Katniss fan fics. Overall, it's a good start, and it seems promising. :)
This is a really good start, and I'm a pretty big fan of the Hunger Games. Just revise this because there are some spelling mistakes, and grammar mistakes. The ending felt a little rushed to me because you're squishing info. at the last second which is not a good thing. You should slow the pace a little, and try to portray the emotions a little more because I didn't feel it. I like your idea of writing about Glimmer instead of the overused Katniss fan fics. Overall, it's a good start, and it seems promising. :)
This is a really good start, and I'm a pretty big fan of the Hunger Games. Just revise this because there are some spelling mistakes, and grammar mistakes. The ending felt a little rushed to me because you're squishing info. at the last second which is not a good thing. You should slow the pace a little, and try to portray the emotions a little more because I didn't feel it. I like your idea of writing about Glimmer instead of the overused Katniss fan fics. Overall, it's a good start, and it seems promising. :)
This is a really good start, and I'm a pretty big fan of the Hunger Games. Just revise this because there are some spelling mistakes, and grammar mistakes. The ending felt a little rushed to me because you're squishing info. at the last second which is not a good thing. You should slow the pace a little, and try to portray the emotions a little more because I didn't feel it. I like your idea of writing about Glimmer instead of the overused Katniss fan fics. Overall, it's a good start, and it seems promising. :)