Trapped, Caged, And Tortured

Trapped, Caged, And Tortured

27.9K Reads 375 Votes 5 Part Story
Jessi By rudie96 Completed

Victoria's P.O.V.

I opened my eyes and looked around, where the hell am I...?  The ground was damp underneath my stiff body.  It was dark outside, not a single star, nor the moon was shining; so I take that back.  It was pitch black.  It was darker than the insides of my eyelids.

            I sat up and took in my surroundings.  I saw blurry, shadowy outlines of what I believed to be trees, and smaller blurry shadows, possible bushes, shrubs, rocks, or animals.  Was I in a forest?  That was my best guess. 

            In the blink of an eye, surprising enough, it was too bright to see.  The lights were like eyes, coming fast at me.  I was quick and smart enough to register to get up, and run for my life. 

            "How the hell do I manage to wake up in the-" my face got hit with leaves and a branch, "Yup, a forest.  Why am I getting chased to my death in the middle of God knows where?!"

            The last thing I remember is getting hit with that branch, and the first thing...

Wow! Nice touches, great descriptions, darker than the insides of my eyelids, you truly paint a picture.
MysteryJaye MysteryJaye Jun 22, 2016
So far so good. Seems to be going in a goo line. I have been enjoying reading this sort of book and so far there have been so many different situations every one surprises me with there great imaginations. Keep up the great writing. Hopefully the rest of you story stay as good if not better
XxReagsxX XxReagsxX Dec 17, 2015
I think it is pretty good I love the plot and the characters names
XoPie46 XoPie46 Mar 09, 2015
@rudie96 and you were how old then????? I'm like, not even 13. ( I'm brilliant, shush)
- - Mar 06, 2015
I am still trying to think of why they are being kept captive.