Outcast

Outcast

20.4K Reads 288 Votes 18 Part Story
Kennedi By Dancing_In_The_Rain Updated Dec 24, 2011

Anna Smith moves across the country to a new home in Oregon to try to escape her ex-boyfriend who liked to abuse her, was creepily possessive, psychotic and was everywhere she was. When she moves, she meets new friends and her mate at the high school, all sharing the same secret. Then when her ex-boyfriend finds her again, she's faced with the decision of moving, or staying and fighting even if she has to betray her parents and friends to do so, but her ex has a secret of his own.

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- - Nov 26, 2011
Wasn't confusing at all lol.  You said prologue so I automatically assumed it would be a flashback or of some sort:) pretty good beginning<3 on to chapter 1:)
Dancing_In_The_Rain Dancing_In_The_Rain Nov 26, 2011
@LHproductionz Lol thanks :) I wasn't intending to make it sad, but maybe it is?
ygyguii ygyguii Nov 26, 2011
It was a bit fast but it explained what the situation was well. I feel sorry for that girl. I like the last couple of lines :) A few grammar errors but it's okay. Overall, it was good :) :D
LHproductionz LHproductionz Nov 26, 2011
@Dancing_In_The_Rain  omg i read your story before, it made me cry a little don't know if i'm to emotional or something but Great job!
Dancing_In_The_Rain Dancing_In_The_Rain Nov 26, 2011
@Chikitaloca911 Thanks! You're right, it did feel detached a bit and I hoped I fixed that when I went and edited it.
Dancing_In_The_Rain Dancing_In_The_Rain Nov 26, 2011
@LHproductionz DX I keep looking for those and I can;t find them! Could you point them out, if you don't mind? I think I've gone blind... Thanks though! :)