Illusion

Illusion

367 Reads 185 Votes 21 Part Story
Shilpy By incubuslamia Updated May 18

A century long love caged in dream
Separated by situation Or say Death
Reunites But Is it just illusion 
Of getting together Or Was it a truth ? 

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Cora , completely normal spoil teen . For other she is strong , not at all emotional , sweet with only small group of people but there was a secret which is limited with her . She keep having illusion or say dream of her cruel past . She doesn't remember anything but have emotion with it . Would you gonna overcome that illusion or loose herself again ? 

Ansh , new mysterious guy who keep meeting Cora . He share a past with her which she doesn't know . His mission is take her back without get involved in love again . Would he be successful in this ?

  • brother
  • cruel
  • different
  • fantasy
  • friend
  • immortal
  • love
  • paranormal
  • poetic
  • rivalry
  • romance
  • teen
  • wattys2018
But I don't want to die yet! I still have to kiss a stranger a.k.a señorita!
This is moving a little fast. Slowing the action down is more effective.
I really like these cutaways! They have some really good detail, and they add good emotion.
_LivyLou_ _LivyLou_ May 20
Could you maybe read my book? Or maybe not? Either way, thanks!
Some of these sentences are fragments. Make sure each sentence has a subject and predicate.