More of my poems which are not about love
awww! reading the comments below there's not really anything else i can say! except disagree with @emilyrb because there is, sort of, the use of enjambent in your work, whilst couplets and a caesura (for this poem especially) would ruin the simple flow of this lovely piece of writing! :D
Aww this is so sweet <3 I loved the way it's rhymes just flowed.
awww i love it. Short and sweet always make the best. Keep writing. And also take your own advice. Too bad i didnt listen to myself otherwise i wouldnt be in this big hole.