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Poems and More Poems

Poems and More Poems

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Aashiya By GlamorousGlamour Updated Apr 10, 2011

More of my poems which are not about love

LostMarbles LostMarbles Jun 01, 2011
awww! reading the comments below there's not really anything else i can say! except disagree with @emilyrb because there is, sort of, the use of enjambent in your work, whilst couplets and a caesura (for this poem especially) would ruin the simple flow of this lovely piece of writing! :D
BlueSkiesGrayClouds BlueSkiesGrayClouds Feb 26, 2011
Aww this is so sweet <3 I loved the way it's rhymes just flowed. 
Readmedotcom Readmedotcom Feb 26, 2011
awww i love it. Short and sweet always make the best. Keep writing. And also take your own advice. Too bad i didnt listen to myself otherwise i wouldnt be in this big hole.