It is my destiny to save the world................with a STICK!!!

It is my destiny to save the world................with a STICK!!!

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Lena By talkingchicle Updated Sep 10, 2010

Lia Montana comes from a wealthy Italian background. Her father is dead and her mother is a big shot fashion designer. When she gets a letter from The Trevi  Accademia requesting for her to carry out her education in Italy she's not over the moon. Her mother hasnt let her meet the Italian side of the family because she feels the boys in the family are a bad influence. The Trevi  Accademia is not a normal school. This school is for Harpies, White eyes, Valkyries, Satyrs and Sparti. Faced with that and the fact that her mother is the daughter to one of the two biggest Maffia's in the world, how do you think she'll cope? 

Unknown2me Unknown2me Aug 12, 2010
The writing is good as is the grammar.  You describe things well, but I think that it was a little sudden and unrealistic the whole "Your going to school in Italy this Saturday" without any prepping or hinting.
talkingchicle talkingchicle May 16, 2010
lolz im currently writing the next part
                              i randomly came up with the story
                              about a week ago
SkyeJC SkyeJC May 15, 2010
Hey i dint noe it was just like one chapter lol. This is great! can't wait for more!
ThisKittyHasClawz ThisKittyHasClawz May 04, 2010
Nice! It's cool how you levae so many unanswered questions - eg how did the battle start?
                              
                              ThisKittyHasClawz