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my guardian angel!

my guardian angel!

491 Reads 3 Votes 2 Part Story
katelyn woods By bblgumm13 Updated Mar 09, 2011

17 year old emelyn is a tranfer student at briorwood prep school for her senior year. she expects the usual bording school education as her last few schools. but theres something odd about the boy she meets on her first day and she can't quite figure it out. besides the fact that hes a concieded hottie she has no idea what to expect from him. until one day she makes a shocking discovery. one that unravels history and brings to life childhood fears and fantasies.

MarkedRainbows MarkedRainbows Nov 18, 2011
I LOVE UR STORY !!!!  try to put one line spacing for the dialog though so it doesnt look so pack tgt and mixed up . makes it a little hard to read ! other than that im pretty much liking it so far !!! keep writing :)
bblgumm13 bblgumm13 Apr 08, 2011
@minnie_057 oh thanks haha. yeah im going to get an editor so that i can fix those types of mistakes. :) thanks though i forgot about doing that. haha oh and didnt you comment on the club editor page too?