Strictly Business *Editing and Adding More*

Strictly Business *Editing and Adding More*

2.7K Reads 89 Votes 10 Part Story
BrokenTypewriter By BrokenTypewriter Updated Mar 31, 2014

Adam James has to propose. That's easy enough. Throw in a month's time limit, lacking pick up skills, sibling rivalry, forgetful old flames, a life of partying, and a failing family business. Now that may be difficult.

ASLgirl ASLgirl Aug 04, 2012
I love the storyline so far and how you wrote it!  You had great descriptions and great grammar!
thetenaciousturtle thetenaciousturtle Jul 19, 2012
Nice plot! I loved your writing style because it really kept me interested:) Your dialogue is very smooth and the descriptions are great! Loved it!
automotivatorlove automotivatorlove Jul 18, 2012
His wife scares me, she remind me of your mother.
                              Enough, I know that feeling bro lol :D 
                              I wish you could describe things a little more but that's probably it !
AmyleeMichaels AmyleeMichaels Jul 18, 2012
I thought this was a believable males point of view. Well written and good attention to detail.
dreamernow31 dreamernow31 Jul 15, 2012
That was surprising. I thought his dad would be cold since he ordered, not asked, him to go to the office. :P
rachierayy rachierayy Jul 15, 2012
Very original. I love that it's from a guys perspective.That's something unique :P The beginning really caught my attention! Good job!<3