My Own Personal Roller Coaster

My Own Personal Roller Coaster

259 Reads 11 Votes 1 Part Story
Kelli By joker0317 Updated Feb 26, 2011

Migraines.  I've had them for the past five years and even allowed them to run my life for a time-being.  Just by writing these words, I feel as if I have some control.

silly-sophie silly-sophie Apr 07, 2011
love it! love the idea of a 'roller coaster', too! great work!
                              xoxo
                              sophie
purplegirl14 purplegirl14 Mar 05, 2011
Wow, this is very good. Extremely powerful. You really portray this right. I suffer from chronic pain, and this is exactly how I am a lot. Great job. Voting!
SavyJParker SavyJParker Mar 03, 2011
This is really good. It's very deep and emotional. The only thing that O would say to do different might be to separate it into more paragraphs, but as far as the writing itself, it's really good.
porshalovebby porshalovebby Mar 02, 2011
this is really good i like how you werereally discriptive like shirindee said and the whole time i was reading iwas think of how love is alot like at the top of a rollar coaster soo my teachers would be happy i made a realtionship with a story!!!
DopestBizzle DopestBizzle Mar 02, 2011
u can imaginee wat u sayy.Its so discriptivee. :D
                              awsomeee.I voted dont for get to read my story
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dontemm dontemm Mar 02, 2011
Wow! You paint such a vivid picture; this all sounds so painful... I would hate to deal with something like this. This is good though:)