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The Blackwater Chronicles: Lex & Lawe

The Blackwater Chronicles: Lex & Lawe

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Nonnie By Nonnie228 Updated Apr 06, 2011

Since they all escaped from the labs run by a secret government agency called the Federation of Feral Studies Lawson Miller has done nothing but try to keep his extended family of genetically enhanced Ferals safe. The night they were celebrating their freedom turns into an eventful evening when Lawe's younger brother Duane shows up with a human claiming that he's going to marry her. Everyone is surprised when Lawe claims her as his own mate he has to learn how to deal with an independent female.  Alexis Taylor just lost her brother and accepted the proposal from her best friend Duane out of obligation, but when he takes her home to meet the rest of his family. She's thrown into a world she never knew existed. With the Federation hunting them and them uncovering secrets about their own genetics, can Lex and Lawe make a home?

Nonnie228 Nonnie228 Mar 18, 2011
@yramay Its okay read when you can and most of the history and stuff is revealed as you read.
yramay yramay Mar 18, 2011
Hey! I've been having a lot to do, so I haven't been reading much, but I do have a few tips:
                              Maybe add a bit more background or history to the story. Try to add a good flow between thoughts and ideas. 
DeathlyAuthor DeathlyAuthor Mar 18, 2011
ik im srry its just from what i saw it was like that i should of continued b4 i comented .
Nonnie228 Nonnie228 Mar 18, 2011
@strugglinwriter did you continue reading or did you just read the blurb?
Nonnie228 Nonnie228 Mar 18, 2011
@strugglinwriter While i have heard of the novels i haven't actually read them. i hope that as you continue to read there will be some differences.  
Nonnie228 Nonnie228 Mar 01, 2011
@xxfrozentearzxx That's cool i understand, you may want to check out one of my other stories than. i have plenty of romance on my page.