My Immortal

My Immortal

35.9K Reads 299 Votes 44 Part Story
Franz By pancakenomnom Completed

Zera Thompson’s parents were gone because of vampires. Her dad died and her mom was kidnapped by those creatures. After thirteen years, she takes the first step of entering into their world. And accidentally, she met Gabriel Hopkins, a vampire, and she falls madly in love with him. Gabriel, because of being a vampire, thrusts Zera into his world, unknown of his real identity. How would Zera handle her emotions if she knew about him and the horrible fate her mom was in? Would love be enough to ease all the pain she felt?

relinquishxdreams relinquishxdreams Jul 29, 2012
@franzpan12 Your weclomez! :3 Haha nahh its okii:) I dont mind:) Take your time:)
pancakenomnom pancakenomnom Jul 27, 2012
@-dreamxmidnight- Thank you so much! :D The update is too slow. I'm ver sorry for that. :)
relinquishxdreams relinquishxdreams Jul 27, 2012
I like it's very interesting:). You have a nice flow of words:)
pancakenomnom pancakenomnom Dec 09, 2011
@ladyaufait yes girlfriend..ahua jkud..kaila kag pending na kaau ni nga story..???? sensya na.. I suck at descriptions..
OkayThenHarry OkayThenHarry Jul 26, 2011
best prologue EVER!!! haha it was great!!! :) *sigh* i love vampires!!! well, GOOD vampires....T_T it was seriously a great start!!  off to the next chap!!! :)
pancakenomnom pancakenomnom Jul 18, 2011
@edisonevilladxb thank you and please be patient..i have to straight it out with college schedule..