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Country Boy

Country Boy

36.4K Reads 470 Votes 7 Part Story
orangecow2 By orangecow2 Updated Nov 09, 2013

Payton did not want to go to visit her dad for the whole summer but when she meets Lucas, a super hot, country boy. Will she change her mind about staying with her Dad or will she stay in New York with her mother.

MayC19 MayC19 Jun 28, 2012
@orangecow2  well I got a new laptop and my Sony Vegas is fine, it's just I need to get the extra effects. I will lt you know :)
TopHatRebellion TopHatRebellion Jan 03, 2012
a little fast but i get where this is going and also your puncuation is a little off but thats fine. i can still read it and stuff
MayC19 MayC19 Jul 15, 2011
is the offer for me to make a trailer for this story still available? :) i have my charger working now :)
orangecow2 orangecow2 Apr 11, 2011
Thanks for the comment i apreciate it, everyone says i go fast i have been trying to slow down and i hope the second chapter did at least a little
Uniqueuser42 Uniqueuser42 Apr 11, 2011
And I really hope you got that comment because it says you didn't.
Uniqueuser42 Uniqueuser42 Apr 11, 2011
Alright here's. What I think.
                              I really like the concept of this story. It's an excellent plot and, frankly, you pull it off well.
                              Only it went a little fast. What did jack look like? What about her bedroom? And her? 
                              These are things I wish I knew.
                              Please keep writing this, it's epic.