Payton did not want to go to visit her dad for the whole summer but when she meets Lucas, a super hot, country boy. Will she change her mind about staying with her Dad or will she stay in New York with her mother.
@orangecow2 well I got a new laptop and my Sony Vegas is fine, it's just I need to get the extra effects. I will lt you know :)
a little fast but i get where this is going and also your puncuation is a little off but thats fine. i can still read it and stuff
is the offer for me to make a trailer for this story still available? :) i have my charger working now :)
Thanks for the comment i apreciate it, everyone says i go fast i have been trying to slow down and i hope the second chapter did at least a little
And I really hope you got that comment because it says you didn't.
Alright here's. What I think.
I really like the concept of this story. It's an excellent plot and, frankly, you pull it off well.
Only it went a little fast. What did jack look like? What about her bedroom? And her?
These are things I wish I knew.
Please keep writing this, it's epic.