Alpha, Do I Know You? [Watty Awards 2012]

Alpha, Do I Know You? [Watty Awards 2012]

31 Part Story 3.2M Reads 61.2K Votes
Chelsea By starsarewhatilove Completed

Evangeline is what you can call the pack's maid. She's always bullied and teased. She always have endless chores but she isn't unhappy. She's being called fat and ugly but she's beautiful and sexy. She's called a weakling because they haven't seen her shift and assumed the werewolf gene skipped her. She was rejected. What happens when she leaves the pack, gets amnesia, changes her whole attitude, and comes back to their pack with totally bad ass attitude and no memories of who they were? What happens when they discover that she can shift and one of the strongest wolves in the world?

Um I think you could use a better means of transition from the   italicized parts to the story.  But overall I am enjoying it. Your charictar is funny, and not too poor poor me like some tend to be.
iLuv5Sup3sX0X iLuv5Sup3sX0X Jan 04, 2016 02:04AM
I can tell ur mind is already beautifully crafty. The introduction is a hook just in case ir wondering.
Wow, Poly, are you talking to your so called formed Trisha? Or are you talking to yourself?
Crossed her hairy arms? Is she a Lycan? 'Cause there's no way a wolf can cross his or her arm like a Lycan does. Yup. Definitely a Lycan.... I think?
The only ass that is fat are yours. Don't put the sentence 'fat' with Evangeline on it. The word 'fat' only fits with you in the sentence! Lying is bad ya know! (Okay I'm being mean but I don't fudging care! XD)
EmberlySkye EmberlySkye Dec 03, 2015 02:14AM
This doesn't make sense so if females find their mates at 16 then she shouldn't know they are mates. . . And it seems she learned this a while but she wasn't 16 before this day.