Rouge Racer

Rouge Racer

9.6K Reads 141 Votes 18 Part Story
XD By Saiya1 Updated Apr 14, 2014

16 year old runaway, Madison Velasquez, aims to find a new life in urban South Korea. However, fate has a way of making things difficult for her, and running into a well known drug dealer/car smuggler wasn't the plan for Madison either. In the mix of her new life, Madison has a choice to make: Saving the Upper-World from total annihilation from Hell by racing other competitors to win by using supernatural powers, or Live a normal, boring life in S. Korea. In a race to save Earth, can Madison find the time to find a real home, a real family, her true life?

yellowfai123 yellowfai123 Jun 05, 2011
i like it you chapters are long too can u check out my story though
HannahLou95 HannahLou95 May 29, 2011
this is very good! i didn't find any mistakes :) it captures your interest right away and makes you want to read more (: 
                              but remember if theres a new speaker it means a new paragraph. It makes it easier to read :) but other than that well done :D x
alibaileylovesyou alibaileylovesyou May 29, 2011
i like it alot... i am biracial south korean& black so i naturally like the setting i think it grabbed my attention on the first page job well done!
wearetheminority wearetheminority May 26, 2011
coolbeans i like it :) only thing: NEW SPEAKER-NEW PARAGRAPH
TiffanySilver TiffanySilver May 24, 2011
this is a great start! our descriptions are great! I just found one kinda big mistake, always start a new paragraph when some one new is talking! other than that your story is great and interesting
NoMoneyNoHoney NoMoneyNoHoney May 23, 2011
It sucks to be sick...
                              
                              anyways about your story, its great how the first day at a new school she's made friends, at some point it was like she was dreaming, its very well composed and so this is the 20th vote, showing some support.