Breaking Through The Surface

Breaking Through The Surface

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Melissa By UntilWeCollide Completed

Lorelai Wakely's life isn't what it seems to be. She never thought the truth of how she grew up would be so heinous.

Now living in a completely different world than what she's used to, Lorelai has many difficult choices to make. Including, whether or not to accept help from mysterious Cohen Callahan to overcome her worst fear.

Will she let him in or will she sink with no way to break through the surface?

I love it! I read your other book, rampage, and if it is anything like this one I won't be able to stop reading it. ❤️
Bluehall Bluehall Jul 08
Yes, life will be different now. Like what you've got going on here, Breaking Through the Surface.
shatteredclouds shatteredclouds Jun 16, 2014
Aww, ohmygosh, Cooper is a total sweetheart. I need a brother like this. Her mom is also adorable! I like how you were really able to describe the awkwardness // tension when she arrived too.
shatteredclouds shatteredclouds Jun 16, 2014
This is really good! I like where the story's going, but like holy crap she kidnapped her -- like basically in front of her real mother. And she gave herself away pretty damn easily.
                              
                              Tsk Tsk.
AimeranceMerveille AimeranceMerveille Apr 22, 2014
I like the room! JUst one thing, though! For like, the sake of the mood and creating emotions and feelings, take things slow and take time to explain things, you know? LIke, don't rush yet! (: 
                              
                              I love her brother, though! Her whole family is like a bundle of joy.
shyswaggg shyswaggg Apr 14, 2014
Wow Samantha was a crazy... And her room is amazing, I'm jealous. Can't wait for next update