NEW: Introducing Tap. Addictive chat stories for your 📲 Now in 10 languages
Breaking Through The Surface

Breaking Through The Surface

51K Reads 2.4K Votes 32 Part Story
UntilWeCollide By UntilWeCollide Completed

Lorelai Wakely's life isn't what it seems to be. She never thought the truth of how she grew up would be so heinous.

Now living in a completely different world than what she's used to, Lorelai has many difficult choices to make. Including, whether or not to accept help from mysterious Cohen Callahan to overcome her worst fear.

Will she let him in or will she sink with no way to break through the surface?

Bluehall Bluehall Jul 08, 2016
Yes, life will be different now. Like what you've got going on here, Breaking Through the Surface.
shatteredclouds shatteredclouds Jun 16, 2014
This is really good! I like where the story's going, but like holy crap she kidnapped her -- like basically in front of her real mother. And she gave herself away pretty damn easily.
                              Tsk Tsk.
AimeranceMerveille AimeranceMerveille Apr 09, 2014
And DID I MENTION THAT SHE ACTUALLY HAS SUCH A COOL NAME? IS THERE LIKE, A story behind her name or something?
                              And TWIN BROTHER!! haha.. can not wait to meet him (:
shyswaggg shyswaggg Apr 09, 2014
I'm really excited for this story. I know it's going to be real good! Can't wait!! Thanks for letting me know about it