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Land Of The Elves

Land Of The Elves

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Amelia By heartsandcrosses Updated Sep 24, 2011

I wrote this for an English assignment on 'short story beginnings' and thought it would be a good idea to continue it. 
It's a story about fantasy, love and what happens when you fall into a world that you've never imagined to exist.
Tell me if you think i should continue it or not, criticism welcome :)

Nansel_of_the_Elves Nansel_of_the_Elves Sep 22, 2011
Ah! I am left with a hanging cliff feeling! I have pins ands needles that I am sitting on! Please continue with moreness. :3
heartsandcrosses heartsandcrosses Jul 14, 2011
@irelandb19 heyy, thanks so much for your advice. Yeah, i think i might write more before i post it as well so i can figure out where the story is going before i put it up :) 
Bridget_To_Beyond Bridget_To_Beyond Jul 13, 2011
I think you should definitely keep going. It sounds interesting, but you might want to keep going and then ask people again if your not sure. 
KerstinRobinson KerstinRobinson Jun 06, 2011
I like it, you should definitely keep going. I would love to read more.