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The Dance of Love's Most Perfect Blade

The Dance of Love's Most Perfect Blade

103 Reads 4 Votes 1 Part Story
Kim1617 By Kim1617 Completed

Written in iambic tetrameter.

DavidAvetisov DavidAvetisov Dec 15, 2013
So epic, and as if painted with words. I really like your style of writing. Please checkout mine, I also write in iambic.
Kim1617 Kim1617 Mar 27, 2011
@hollymassie - thank you! Luscious is one of my favorite words!!
HollyMassie HollyMassie Mar 26, 2011
OOOOOOOOOOOOO. Luscious -- and I am not a fan of "love" poems but this one has such texture!
Kim1617 Kim1617 Mar 25, 2011
@Wordslinger - highest compliment ever! Thanks!
                              @Tenderpoison - Thank you! You got it :)
                              @CalebPaul - thanks so much, CP - "graceful" is such a great word
CalebPaul CalebPaul Mar 19, 2011
Such a beautifully dark scene, made even more.. I think I want to say graceful with the tetrameter, it really is like a dance
WordSlinger WordSlinger Mar 10, 2011
Well, I really dont know what to say, because this is really good. Speechless, thank you, much appreciated WS