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Finding Charlie

Finding Charlie

652 Reads 15 Votes 5 Part Story
Katie O'Rourke By KatieORourke Completed

When 19 year old Charlotte Howard doesn't return from a party, only the people who know her best are appropriately terrified.

It's not like Charlie to stay out without calling. As the hours turn to days, older sister Olivia tries to put the pieces together. She finds a lost cell phone, an abandoned car and an untrustworthy boyfriend she'd never met before who was the last person to see her sister alive. And he's not the only secret Charlie's been keeping.

not need someone.
                              Like the way you have pulled us into her work.
Don't need the But at the beginning of the paragraph. 
                              been advertised, a co-worker knew...
TabathaStirling TabathaStirling Apr 19, 2014
Enjoying this.  The relationship metaphor is excellent.   The weariness of her current relationship is well-felt and described by the narrator.  More please :)