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The secret door of time

The secret door of time

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xxfreakxx By xxfreakxx Updated Oct 06, 2010

There is a door, a door that should never be opened. But when Maya's brother opens it and goes through what will happen to him? After he goes missing Maya is determined to find him and when she comes across the strange door she goes in to find her brother. But what awaits her on the other side? What dangers must she face and what creatures are lurking in the shadows? Will she ever find her brother and escape?

nekoyaz nekoyaz Oct 25, 2010
I wish my car was as cool as that door. bt then people would try to steal it.
TBL_54_Rae TBL_54_Rae Oct 24, 2010
I rather like it, your writing is quite superb, just a quickie, maybe when you post, try something a little longer? Just a suggestion : )
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