Carnivorous Hearts

Carnivorous Hearts

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Neonnerd By Neonnerd Updated Apr 09, 2014

If she loved him, he would die.
Those were the conditions set for Violet to follow. For if she did not she would become a monster and his innocent heart would become her prey.

starburst87 starburst87 Apr 09, 2014
Arthur and Violet are so innocent and sweet you really capture the excitement of a crush. I am eager to see how the past and present (introduction) tie together. :D
PolkaDot41 PolkaDot41 Apr 09, 2014
I really love the old-fashioned feel this novel has. It's very innocent charming love that I think will really provide a nice contrast against the dark elements you like to incorporate. Seriously never stop writing! You're amazing.
PolkaDot41 PolkaDot41 Apr 09, 2014
I really enjoyed the introduction. Lots of details and descriptions, all around it was very haunting and mysterious. Cannot wait to read more of your work. You never disappoint. (: