Can't You Hear Me Now?

Can't You Hear Me Now?

35 Part Story 101K Reads 736 Votes
*KorenaMc* By KorenaMcArthur Updated Jan 24, 2013

Formerly known as "Silent Howl"
Penny and Jacob are twins that were abandoned as babies. They grew up moving from one foster home to the next. With the abuse they endured at the hand of those that took care of them will they ever be able to move past the memories haunt their dreams. Penny is a mute who can communicate using telepathy with her twin. Who are the new foster parents? Why were they so secretive? After nearly three years living with them they find out who the new foster parents are. And just before they turn sixteen they find out they are werewolves. How will being a mute human affect her wolf. Will they ever feel loved and have a forever home? Do they find out the truth of their birth and heritage? Keep reading to unveil the twist and turns that are to come.

me2you804 me2you804 Jul 20, 2012 03:51PM
I didn't say it was bad, I just said that it would help with the flow if you sort out the spelling mistakes. Even I make mistakes on mine and I have plenty of reads on mine too.
KorenaMcArthur KorenaMcArthur Jul 20, 2012 12:47PM
@me2you804 I will be the first to admit that I am the worst speller but i have fixed the first few chapter but will not change them on here untill im finished with the book.  But you dont get 17,000 read on a bad story.
KorenaMcArthur KorenaMcArthur Jun 13, 2012 02:45AM
yea I have already fixed what i have found on my computer just not here
Gothink Gothink Jun 12, 2012 04:06PM
too many spelling errors for me :(
                              its a pet peeve...  especially here instead of hear.
HannahCrompton HannahCrompton Jun 09, 2012 08:35PM
Have a look at the editing clubs, as some phrases are rather awkward, but apart from that a good first novel so far! :D
KorenaMcArthur KorenaMcArthur Jun 08, 2012 09:21PM
@Beautiful_Liar cool thanks. I prob will do it tomarrow and just go back and fix all the finished ones