breaking free

breaking free

334 Reads 26 Votes 4 Part Story
galnextdoor By galnextdoor Updated Jun 17, 2012

Meet Chantelle White!! the smart blonde who as no idea how beautiful she is,both on the inside and out.Her life is a mess , with her being the mayor's daughter and all.... But that is not the only mess in her life ; her perfect family is not so perfect up close ... and so , all she wants to do is get away.
Then comes Travis Simmons , the new guy. What is his story? How will they change each other's lives? How do you think they are going to face all the complications  . This is a story of them...Breaking Free...
Read away ..

  • bestfriend
  • break
  • channy
  • drama
  • freedom
  • jason
  • new
storymaker77 storymaker77 Jun 16, 2012
I thought this was extremely good especially the first paragraph. It really lured me in. Which is really great I love the way you write!  Continue the greatness.
xxRoyalBloodxx xxRoyalBloodxx Jun 15, 2012
Oh my, oh my!! You always leave amazing (awesome, great, interesting, you get my point) cliffhangers! ;P
                              Travis is sooo so nicee <3 Aww, such a cute guy! ..Okay, I'll stop now. But seriously, I loved it :) Can't wait to read more ^^
BiancaBones BiancaBones Jun 15, 2012
This is really good, a few grammar mistakes, but still good. Interesting :) voted, reading on. :)
radiantly radiantly Jun 11, 2012
WOW! Interesting! (; Haha, I'm wondering what's going to happen next! :O Reading more! :D
Abbzygail Abbzygail Jun 10, 2012
It was a good work but had a little grammar mistakes... nothing a little editing can't fix