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Angel With A Shotgun

Angel With A Shotgun

1.6K Reads 100 Votes 8 Part Story
Lim Mei Lin By RainingPotato Updated Aug 16, 2012

Life in District IX wasn't getting any better for seventeen year-old Emerfidia until one fateful night, she was abducted to become a part of the planet's high-tech capital Cannery's successful 'One Thousand People' project to abduct a thousand people below twenty from all ten districts to be a trained strong and determined soldier, fighting in the Fifth Dynastial War which occurs every thousand years. But that's not the only thing, the rebellions are back, and so are the Freedom Fighters. In this appalling and gruesome fight for victory, Emerfidia finds herself tangled in a love triangle, and uncovering a single bright spark of hope that lays only in her hands, she discovered that she isn't just an ordinary fighter. But a protector of humanity, and perhaps, their last and final hope?

AshleyM101 AshleyM101 Aug 19, 2012
Good story so far! I really enjoy your writing. I am not sure what shape a cuboid is but it is all good
RainingPotato RainingPotato Jul 30, 2012
@TheLexinater aww thanks so much ;) hehe got the title from The Cab's song! I JUST LOVEEE THE CAB!
RainingPotato RainingPotato Jul 27, 2012
@oOSparksFlyOo naww thanks :) Haha, YES! Plenty of people said that this reminded them of the Hunger Games. But I guess as you read on it'll be different. Thanks for voting :))
- - Jul 27, 2012
This kind of reminds me of the Hunger Games! But yours is different, in a great way! Very nicely done! Love the way your write. :)
TheNamesTaken TheNamesTaken Jul 17, 2012
"younghood" - I like that word! I like the story too, an interesting start.
foreverlosttear foreverlosttear Jul 14, 2012
I realise English isn't your first language so I will be lenient with some of the stuff that doesn't make sense, but I suggest getting someone whose first language is English to proof it.