Hell Bound

Hell Bound

222 Reads 14 Votes 4 Part Story
TheRunaway By TheRunaway Updated Jan 04, 2013

Marie's world is turned upside down when demons begin invading her world; killing everyone and anything in their way, except her. Awesome cover done by @xGreenGlitterx

  • big
  • blood
  • bound
  • daughter
  • death
  • demon
  • demons
  • father
  • fear
  • friend
  • hell
  • kill
  • moving
  • murder
  • mustang
  • protectors
  • reveal
  • sarcasm
  • vampire
TheRunaway TheRunaway Mar 02, 2013
@FatelessForever Okie Dokie, will do! Thanks for reading and voting!!!! :D
--tempestuous --tempestuous Mar 02, 2013
I would break up the 2nd paragraph. It gets really long, and hard to read after a while. 
                              
                              But other than that, the evil, gore, and horror, were spot on.
TheRunaway TheRunaway Jan 04, 2013
@DarknessIsMyEnemy, I'll defiantly work on it. This is just an on and off project. :/ my ideas for this story are sadly limited, but I'll work to see its more enjoyable for my readers! Thank you for commenting and for your opinion! :D
DarknessIsMyEnemy DarknessIsMyEnemy Sep 27, 2012
intriguing... just paragraph more and it would be more read-able. - Ax
TheRunaway TheRunaway Jun 04, 2012
@xGreenGlitterx Thanks! I've never written any horror, so I'm glad it lived up to your expectations! :D
theartofhearts theartofhearts Jun 04, 2012
Bloody hell! This is so chilling...a great story! I think that it has a lot of potentioal and I love the goriness!