The dawn.

The dawn.

307 Reads 24 Votes 2 Part Story
mayank arora By _Mayank Updated Apr 07, 2014

''Whatever in the world happens happens with a reason.''

But sometimes, the reason is not told or explained.


Grace Lancaster is a happy mother of two shining stars, Greg and Cici. 

An artist in herself, Grace admired the beauty behind everything, be it the paintings, or be it the scars.

Her smile is Bob, whom she plans to marry in a coming time, after he returns from a tour abroad.

Bob, an investment banker is the man to fall for. Rich, handsome, affectionate and caring. . Grace fell short of adjectives to describe him to her lovely kids, who already accepted Bob as a fatherly figure after he once made a visit and gave them the opportunity to shift into a new residence in the outskirts of Vienna.

Happiness is real, and Grace witnesses a bounty of it after she gives a look to the new abode. 

But there is someone who knows, that every act of unreal kindness, is recompensated.

There is an eye that sees it all, the truth...

  • abod
  • dawn
  • haunted
  • past
  • reality
  • sat
TanyaSinghal TanyaSinghal Apr 09, 2014
New house, crucifix, swing in the garden, giant mirror, weird powercuts and a candle , 
                              Never get's old ^_^
                              Who were jack and Wendy ? :o
_Mayank _Mayank Apr 08, 2014
@My_Little_Secret_  Means a lot coming from you. I'll update soon. :)
My_Little_Secret_ My_Little_Secret_ Apr 08, 2014
I wonder where that THUMP sound was coming from? I really like your writing style :) Can't wait for more!
durriza durriza Apr 08, 2014
Thank you so much for the dedication bro!! Where was the thumping sound coming from?! Cliffhanger ;)
ellewriteswhat ellewriteswhat Apr 07, 2014
Wait a minute im a bit lost who is Jack and Wendy??? Erm?? Okay wait did you mean Greg instead of Jack.. sorry i got a bit lost there.
                              Spooky i must say the last part, i want more and soon updatteeee :D Now i want to write my own horror story. but i might get scared :P lol
- - Apr 07, 2014
Beautiful sentences and descriptions there, Mayank. I enjoyed it! Last part wants me to read more