The Secrets Of Love

The Secrets Of Love

1K Reads 53 Votes 8 Part Story
dagreatgypsy By dagreatgypsy Updated Jul 30, 2012

Vanessa was the type of girl who sat at home in pajamas, re-watching reruns that she had already seen three times. She never missed a day of school, and never made below a B plus in her life. She had always had to live up to her parents' high expectations, but when she was with him, she felt like the world was hers.
Chase was the boy that every girl at Valley-brook High would kill for, and do anything for him to notice them. He's the captain of the baseball team and the hottest guy in the eleventh grade, but he was much more than that. He's smart, funny and has a smile that could light up the entire world, according to Vanessa.
As other girls at Valley-brook High start to close in on Chase, Vanessa tries to find a way to express her feelings for him before it's too late. The only problem is that she has no idea how to.

  • best
  • crush
  • friend
  • insecure
  • love
  • popular
  • shy
RozalittleDhampir RozalittleDhampir Jun 09, 2012
sounds greeat so far, hopefully this wont be too cliche and will have plenty of humor in it. ;)
TKAnez TKAnez Jun 08, 2012
Good set up! I especially like the fact at the beginning. Keep it up!
GeekReader GeekReader Jun 08, 2012
Already voted for because of the amazing little fact at the beginning! Will comment again when I finish :)
wolftail wolftail Jun 08, 2012
Just as the other ones who have comment; I really like the crush-thing in the beginning :) This made me curious... I'll probably continue reading :D Voted, by the way :D
DivulsiveFlame DivulsiveFlame Jun 06, 2012
I love the begining with the definition. At first I thought it was randome, but then I figured it out ;) I hope she gets Chase. Good Job!
                              Keep writing.
Fade_Away Fade_Away Jun 06, 2012
Love it. I loved how you started the story with crush defention. I am curious to see if she gets Chase or not. I definitelly keep reading this.