The Alpha and his mate.

The Alpha and his mate.

71.2K Reads 2.2K Votes 34 Part Story
Ash By ashiihunz Updated Jan 15

His lips crashed into mine and I lost control of everything. My knee's buckled and if he hadn't been holding on to me. I would have fallen for sure. His lips were addictive, I just couldn't get enough of him. and he slowly pulled back, I whimpered a little. Completly upset that he had done so, but he started nibbling my ears and I nearly died once again. "you're mine" he rasped.   I fell out of his spell and pulled back.  "No, if anything I'd say your mine."

  • brandon
  • deception
  • family
  • famous
  • feelings
  • felicity
  • friends
  • friendship
  • hurt
  • jealous
  • john
  • love
  • mates
  • metteo
  • mixed
  • secrets
  • wolf
- - Mar 10
Ok did anybody notice how the beginning of the book was told by a narrater and now it told by the girl
- - Jan 14
She makes it sound like he's her dad giving her the 'sex talk'
CaitiWinchester67 CaitiWinchester67 Aug 20, 2013
I sense some J2 shipping here. Do you happen to watch Supernatural and Arrow? 'Cause it's dripping from your wonderful work!
- - Aug 19, 2013
This is very intersting :), I cna\'t help it but I do like triangle love stories, & the possessiveness of John.
ashiihunz ashiihunz Jul 30, 2013
@MarsQuintanilha Hahah thanks! I'm actually working on a chapter now so when it comes out tell me what you think about it :)
xXPersevereXx xXPersevereXx Jun 12, 2013
I like your story so far especially the ending (cute). The one improvement that I would do is go back and make a capital letter for the start of every sentence. Other then that I like where your story is headed :D