Tonight and Always

Tonight and Always

597 Reads 29 Votes 5 Part Story
Kody Setser By 5797who Updated Jul 28, 2012

When a couple fights for their lives relizes there not in Kansas any more how far will they go to save the world how far will they go to stay together

A special thank you to my illustrator Make_Me_Forget A.K.A Emma Springle

xxRememberxMexx xxRememberxMexx Aug 29, 2012
I was a bit confused when I first read this, and I had to re-read it. The only constructive criticism that I can give you is to add a bit more detail. :)  I can't wait to read more though! :3
QuietQuails QuietQuails Jul 09, 2012
It's really fast! I wish that you would have thrown some more detail into it and make it longer! Its a great plot and you could have done to much with it! I do like your descriptions! For the amount that is there, it is really great!
WildRose393 WildRose393 Jul 06, 2012
Well the ending was interesting, though this contains some confusing parts, needs editing, and it's a bit fast paved :/
Harlum_X Harlum_X Jul 06, 2012
i like the how it's fast-paced and you put an interesting spin on zombie stories! I like how you started it off with someone like Bon Jovi, very original!
5797who 5797who Jul 06, 2012
@AmberGovier I was planning on writing a second book that tells about Chase & Athena and tells how it started
natalieandcarter natalieandcarter Jul 05, 2012
Great first chapter! I actually like the length because it makes the reader want more. wonderful job:D