Me ? The moon goddess daughter?!

Me ? The moon goddess daughter?!

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rosie1314 By rosie1314 Updated Jul 20, 2014

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hey guys this is my first book so fill free to tell me if its bad or good 

thank you for reading my book 

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prologue

THE BEGAINING 

One of the strongest Alpha name Robbie Moon and his mate Kristina Moon was chosen to rase the Moon goddess daughter.  When the Moon goddess and her mate the Sun god were fully mated she gave birth to a beautiful and powerful baby girl . The sun god became crule and power hungry and tryed to kill their only daughter for her beauty and her powers. The baby was more powerful then both of them combind, the sun god and the god of weather, wanted to be the most powerful god that ever lived . But God him self banished him to hell to live his life down their but ended up being king down there , but he want to her. The moon goddess gave her baby girl to the Alpha and his mate to rase her to be a beautiful and unique woman. 

BeastXxXGirl BeastXxXGirl Nov 27, 2014
You need an editor to help you. You need someone to help you revise also.
                              This part wasn't really needed, it felt like a filler and you should try to avoid fillers.