Sarah is your average senior high student who discovers a guy who is anything but average. This anything but average charming 'boy' turns out to be her teacher and much more..
Why if I may ask are there two names for Stefan in your cast on the right?
I am 15 oktober and because I am also close to cut of date I am older then most of my friends in school
why the hell would you have sharp rocks by a pool ? thats a hazard
You have talent but You should space it out in different paragraphs. Otherwise you got your self a keeper! Good chapter by the way and don't take offence just need to work on spacing. Not everyone is perfect so I understand!
Your grammar and spelling are ok, except for the spacing..I got lost where I stopped reading when I glanced away for a bit...
im going to start it noww i was waiting till summer lol thanks tho<3