A Day of Freedom

A Day of Freedom

568 Reads 21 Votes 6 Part Story
Tylerlee94 By Tylerlee94 Completed

A story about a young girl who takes an irreversible chance and makes memories she'll never forget.


-Dedicated to my Mom and Sister, who were and have always been my first and biggest fans. ღ

  • fiction
  • freedom
  • friends
  • romance
  • short
  • sickness
  • spirtual
  • story
  • teen
AmyleeMichaels AmyleeMichaels Jul 18, 2012
Wonderful yet again. Your attention to description and detail is fantastic. 
                              
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StoryGirl5169 StoryGirl5169 Jun 12, 2012
This is really good but you need space out yourd paragraphs because they are waay to long. But i liked it and it was a enjoyable read. So i am awarding you a vote.
wolvesmouth wolvesmouth Jun 04, 2012
Aww this is good! But sort of sad too!(: i think you should make your first paragraph into more than one and try to change up the repetitive "I". Other than that, I have no problems!(: very well written! And it sucks to be anemic! I hope she sees that guy again <3
AmyleeMichaels AmyleeMichaels Jun 04, 2012
fantastic. Well written. I could not find any grammar errors. Touching story
                              
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