Mommy's Little Boy (Under Construction)

Mommy's Little Boy (Under Construction)

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Ashley™ By Ashez55 Updated Sep 04, 2012

When you picture a kidnapper, you see a tall man in an overcoat. Maybe he's hiding behind dark sunglasses at the wheel of a black SUV or a white van, or sitting on a park bench leering at young children. When this image comes to mind, perhaps the phrase 'stranger danger' pops in your head.
You never think it would be someone you know, or that it could happen to you. But it does.
Now picture a woman in her early 30s with big doe eyes the color of melted chocolate and flaming red hair that is as straight as an arrow. You'd never know what she was capable of if you happened to pass her on the street. But me? I know a little more than I probably should.

  • aunt
  • boy
  • call
  • child
  • crazy
  • employee
  • evil
  • evita
  • five
  • kid
  • kidnap
  • lies
  • little
  • luka
  • luke
  • maid
  • margaret
  • marge
  • martha
  • mexican
  • mom
  • mommy
  • murder
  • penelope
  • penny
  • phone
  • police
  • policemen
  • station
  • strange
  • take
  • trip
  • weird
  • woman
Ashez55 Ashez55 Sep 18, 2012
@lastsupperafterparty Thank you, this will help me a lot! :)
Ashez55 Ashez55 Sep 05, 2012
@Matthew_JD_Evans Thank you so much! I still have a lot of editing left to do, but it means a lot to have so much support for this story! :D
Ashez55 Ashez55 Aug 16, 2012
@RachelDesireeOoi Yeah, I try to make little mistakes when Luke is talking so it'll seem more immature but I need to work more on language.
                              
                              @PeetaKatnissXxXx Thank you! :)
                              
                              @GengarLover1342 Thanks for commenting and ignoring my whole chapter, CHARLES. (-_-)
GengarLover1342 GengarLover1342 Aug 16, 2012
@IndigoSkies I hear you there... I get so mad at myself because I have these awesome ideas and I can imagine these great worlds in my mind, but I am incapable of writing a good plot!
Ashez55 Ashez55 Aug 02, 2012
@Beautiful_Michelle Thanks!! :) Yeah, a lot of people are doing kidnapping stories, so this idea kinda popped in my head and I just started writing.
Ashez55 Ashez55 Jun 23, 2012
@IndigoSkies Thanks! The idea was in my head for so long I just had to write it down. There's about a million more voices in my head trying to make me write but I'm sticking with 3 stories at once, that's enough for me! xD