Serial Feeling

Serial Feeling

289 Reads 6 Votes 1 Part Story
Blake By Bwriter Completed

When a man loses his ability to feel he sets out on a psychological journey that tortures him much further than he would have ever imagined.

samkiller3 samkiller3 Feb 28, 2011
Very well written, I must say. I like how you have successfully used repetition in order portray this mans feelings and ideas. Short but effective story. Great piece of work.
CosmosInChaos CosmosInChaos Feb 28, 2011
Ok. This is wonderfully written! And some people don't use repetitions efficiently but you seem to know how to use it effectively and not only on your audience. You have rare and raw talent! Keep it up!!!
chairsniffa chairsniffa Feb 27, 2011
This is almost poetic in its repitions and it has a beauty in its simplicity. Aspergers syndrome is like this, hating to be touched, not understanding emotions, not being able to empathise. Well done!
Kirbyx Kirbyx Feb 25, 2011
Repetition, repetition, and repetition. It has the point of making you remember and proving a point. It feels like a compilation of things we experience sometimes, so it's great to let the readers be closely related to it.