At Water's Edge

At Water's Edge

40.5K Reads 436 Votes 13 Part Story
Josephine DeLoncre By JosephineDeLoncre Updated Nov 04, 2012

A leisurely stroll through the park turns into a life changing walk into the past.  Confused Nina finds herself in the 1800’s England,  petrified she wanders into the presence of a Duchess whose kind heart takes her in.  The Duchesses family quickly makes her one of their own but Nina’s heart yearns to find her way home.  With the help of Ephraim a young physicist, will she discover a way home?  Or will the love of a handsome gentleman persuade her to stay?  Who will be the one to steal her heart and her hand Nicholas, Steven, Robert, or will her yearning to go home triumph above all.  A story fully of twists and turns, heart ache and heart break will end only when it comes full circle.

JosephineDeLoncre JosephineDeLoncre Apr 27, 2014
@ambervancamp28 I am still writing or trying to. I have had some unfortunate things happen in the last year that have saped me creatively but I'm going to try to push through and keep writing. The fact that you still inquire and have read my story makes me happy beyond words. Thank you soooo MUCH!!!
ambervancamp28 ambervancamp28 Apr 08, 2014
Well I have read till the end and I love it but are you going to finish it
AshenhartKrie AshenhartKrie Jan 24, 2013
hey I like it but it really confused me when you switched from first person to third person
HeadLo HeadLo Aug 11, 2012
I'm interested in this, but the switching tenses and point of view are extremely hard to read. I to Nina.. is to was. Not being condescending, just letting you know its best to stick to one. Or introduce as first person, then switch and keep it that way. Either way I'm gonna go back to finish it :)
ladyrafa ladyrafa Feb 14, 2012
Hey Josephine I love your story it just like titanic where old lady tell her life story but only yours is much different which is full of adventure in time travel i can't wait to finish it. But I which really don't because it end make saddened it. What I am trying to say is keep it up....
JosephineDeLoncre JosephineDeLoncre Feb 07, 2012
@feydoc Ohhhhhhh.... you just totally made my day!!!  I’m all smiles LOL : )))))))).   The fact that you think it’s good is amazing, thank you so much for taking the time to read.