The First Thought [Narnia FanFiction!]

The First Thought [Narnia FanFiction!]

32K Reads 89 Votes 1 Part Story
Gabrielle By MiriamGF Updated Jun 03, 2012

My name's Lysette. 

Well, that's all I really know. Or at least remember. 

But these strange creatures seem to know me..

  • aslan
  • edmund
  • fan
  • fiction
  • lucy
  • lysette
  • narnia
  • peter
  • pevensie
  • susan
IISilverEyesII IISilverEyesII Jul 13, 2015
OMYGOSH OMYGOSH OMYGOSH!! I'm freaking out a little on the inside!!!
- - Jan 02, 2015
I really enjoyed the introduction!  The writing made sense and flowed well.
popcorn777 popcorn777 May 07, 2013
thank you ;] this is a really good story I never had anyone actually acknowledge me on hear im really gratefull. yore a realy good righter :] :P
MiriamGF MiriamGF Apr 16, 2013
@Celiii thank you @LovYouXD Danke :] @SWIPER_THE_FOX , this story is on hold until july or so. My ongoing project is Set in Stone :] So go check that out if you love this.
yme123 yme123 Jun 06, 2012
I really like your character, her inner monologue is great. I had to smile at the ancient phone box remark. Your cliffhanger is great
SpeedLikeMotorBikes SpeedLikeMotorBikes Jun 06, 2012
Your writing style is....... WOW!
                              It keeps me interested and makes me want to read more and the cliffhanger was a great start. You also explain things with so much emotion I can tell you put an effort in the things you write and that is what makes me smile about this story. :)