A Sapphire Rose for a Rainy Day

A Sapphire Rose for a Rainy Day

3.6K Reads 84 Votes 3 Part Story
Jack Loveless By SirLoveless Updated Jun 18, 2014

Young Lupa was Ten years old when a man changed his life forever. What happen when the man he has waited for comes back and this time its not as Daddy's friend.  Lupa must find out who this man is? when all the cards are down on the table he will have one question for his beloved parents.... "Daddy where my mother?"

  • boyxboy
  • love
  • lupa
  • manxboy
  • old
  • young
epiceviladventureme1 epiceviladventureme1 Jun 19, 2012
A 10 year old boy finding himself and feeling something for an older man,well that would be something new..Try and word it good so its not about pedophile but of love..I like the start.the description is great as well.
EzraWinn EzraWinn Jun 19, 2012
at ten i hope the only dreams about the man he's having is that they go to the zoo together lol this was a good star to ur story though in some places it felt a bit rushed but reading through again n adding in details will make it all the better
SirLoveless SirLoveless Jun 18, 2012
@myikap xD that wouldn't be something that little Lupa would say but funny none the less.  Chapter two will be up in five so.. get ready xD
SirLoveless SirLoveless Jun 18, 2012
@ShinigamixKimino @SkyBluez  thanks for the lovely worlds and now i have an editor so spelling and grammar should be great :)
myikap myikap Jun 18, 2012
Dang...Ten years old. Man if I was that ten yo. I would have said something like "You sir are hot." and walked to my room.
SirLoveless SirLoveless Jun 07, 2012
@ThatLonelyGirl Same. one of the only normal book i read is a retelling of beauty and the best " La Belle Bete"  it really good