Tutoring Mr. Player

Tutoring Mr. Player

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They call me homewrecker By shivernights Updated Jun 08, 2013

For as long as I can remember I've been smart. I've never gotten into trouble, straight A's all through school, and not a blemish on my record. But being perfect never exactly got me on the popular side of the social scene. Not that I really cared. I was perfectly happy staying in at night and watching a Gilmore Girls marathon while pigging out on popcorn. Until now. Where I was at the police department at four o' clock in the morning waiting for my parents to bail me out. and sitting with the notorious bad boy from my school Preston Falcnor. What did I get myself into?

Autumn Miller was voted most likely to succeed. Soon to be valedictorian she has the world by the tail, but then one thing changes her life completely. The boy she tutors after school. Preston Falcnor. The most well known of all of the bad boys. His debonair good looks and irresistible charms make it almost impossible for Autumn to keep away from him. But there is no way Autumn can get away when she has to spend everyday after school with the hot bad boy. Autumn attempts one of her most difficult feats ever... taming the player. Will Preston give up his bad boy ways to get the grade and the girl? And will Autumn ever succumb to his charms?

ambermichelle99 ambermichelle99 Jul 12, 2014
So far, it is really good. The only problem with it is this: you keep changing tenses. It is easier to write in past tense, so a lot of people change in their writing. ( I do it all the time.) After a little editing, it can be really good.
buttercup187 buttercup187 Jul 11, 2014
Ummm this is a little weird my name is Autumn Harris do you know me or something?
etherealdevils etherealdevils Mar 09, 2014
My pu should update really soon. You left us at a cliffhanger moment
food_food_food_ food_food_food_ Jan 20, 2014
Y r u copying autumn millers name? No offense tho but you could've been more creative
Emmaline1301 Emmaline1301 Dec 03, 2013
This is amazing I'm hooked please update. You are an excellent writer
arielle9999 arielle9999 Jun 01, 2013
Nice work, no no let me re-phrase that, marvellous job on this xD