In Love With My Boyfriend's Best Friend (On Hold)

In Love With My Boyfriend's Best Friend (On Hold)

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Madison By 28maddy28 Updated Jun 27, 2011

When Anna was sent away to a boarding school in Washington she was followed coincidently by her former best friend who used to be like a brother. After changing her look, getting chewed out by her alleged best friend, and drawing the attention of the hottest guy in school, she starts to fall back under the wing of her ex-best friend. Anna must make the choice between her friend, and her true love. And even worse. Her boyfriend or his best friend.

amandaisadorable amandaisadorable Mar 24, 2011
Mr hawe? Its snowy outside?? And green death balls... Sounds like our gym:]
28maddy28 28maddy28 Mar 13, 2011
thanks for the proof reading! stupid microsoft can't tell the difference between no and know XD
28maddy28 28maddy28 Mar 13, 2011
thanks! you'll understand more hopefully in the next chapters
TehmeenaArshad TehmeenaArshad Mar 12, 2011
Hah, Haley when Haley cracked up laughing! XD
                              
                              - "I barely no anyone at this school." (May I suggest that you change "no" to "know"...)
                              
                              - "Why would ('you') tell her that?" 
                              
                              Ooh, what could Fiona be thinking now? >:(
                              
                              Amazing chapter by the way! ^_^
TehmeenaArshad TehmeenaArshad Mar 12, 2011
Really interesting so far! I really enjoyed it. ^_^
                              
                              Haha, she's having "tingly-feelings" for Steven, even though he may be infuriating to her. 
                              
                              I didn't find any mistakes, so well done! 
                              
                              I'm off to read the next chapter....