Do I know you?

Do I know you?

20 Part Story 1.2K Reads 13 Votes
Patricia By Pats1998 Updated Mar 08, 2013 09:25PM

Daniela is a girl that thoughts a lot in a forest. One day she is thinking in her place and a guy interrupts her and tells her to live his yard. That really bothers her, but then she notice that she is the only one in the small town that does not remember this guy that came back to town named Joe. While she is looking for answers about this guy and why she don´t remember him, they fall in love with each other and have a romantic adveture that gives her slowly all the answers.
    
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Pats1998 Pats1998 Jun 05, 2012 11:40PM
Thanks! I will correct the mistakes when I get some time ! I have been very busy with school and all that! :) @EurekaBharali Enjoy the rest of my book. :)
EurekaEureka EurekaEureka Jun 05, 2012 10:20AM
It's good.. except for a few grammar mistakes, which are easily fixable, the story has a nice flow.. keep writing :)
Pats1998 Pats1998 Jun 04, 2012 08:49PM
@Trisha16087 Thanks. :) It is really nice to hear that people likes you story. I hope you keep enjoying it!
Trisha16087 Trisha16087 Jun 04, 2012 01:50AM
This is great! I love the idea... It seems very fresh and new. I also love the voice you've given to Daniela! She reminds me a lot of myself. I also like the dialogue... it seems very natural and is super funny. Can't wait to see where this goes!