Broken Hearts, Betrayal, and Hell

Broken Hearts, Betrayal, and Hell

661 Reads 4 Votes 1 Part Story
Jason By xXxMysticBeastzxXx Updated Feb 24, 2011

A emo/goth boy  finally gets the girl of his dreams but he is pushing her away will he push her to where he can never get her back? and will his closest friends betrayal him and reveal his secret/sin to the whole high school and will he even survive high school...

xXxMysticBeastzxXx xXxMysticBeastzxXx Apr 24, 2012
@rockmylife1 uploading the next 20 chapters lol i wasn't lazy dw ;)
xXxMysticBeastzxXx xXxMysticBeastzxXx Oct 03, 2011
LOL Im asian I dont care about the grammer lol jk jk alright Im just about done with chapter 2
danielle1308 danielle1308 Oct 03, 2011
Jason it was really good!!! But u need to work on ur grammar and punctuation, sorry. Other than that the story line was really good and I want to read more!!
danielle1308 danielle1308 Oct 03, 2011
Jason!!! Hehe ur story was really good but.... Grammar, k? But the story line was good and I like ur descriptions. I'd like to read the rest so pleeze write more
xXxMysticBeastzxXx xXxMysticBeastzxXx Oct 03, 2011
@rockmylife1Awww thanks but i havent been on for over a year i'll still tryto make more chapters asap keep reading i promise next chapter will be up by the upcoming friday
xXxMysticBeastzxXx xXxMysticBeastzxXx Feb 26, 2011
Oh yea guys sorry I forgot its suppose to be snow in the entire chapter not claudia my bad ...well I guess it doesn't matter