I feel bad saying this but she got herself in this situation
I'm sorry but am I the only one frustrated that she won't run away and save herself? I can't be.
O.o... She called him a pig even though he was a wolf. I hope that meanie mcbeanie dies a slow, painful, torcherous, agonizing death...
i feel like if she ran when she was told to she wouldnt be in the situation she is in now... as a little girl how does she expect to fight them.... she is dumb
OMG, I wanna cry right now! This is soo good! You are really talented!
You are an insanely good writer :) I voted and I'm gonna fan because wow... This was great. You described everything perfectly and put emotion behind your words too. I thought I was a good writer, well not compared to you.:):) your work is so amazing:)