Academy of the Restless [on hold]

2 Part Story 540 Reads 38 Votes
Rem By morbidsucre- Updated 3 years ago
Life is too precious to let go, but it leaves us all too often. It takes courage to live, because you only live once. Or, you're supposed to, at least. Cariney is an exception to this thinking. She's died and come back, despite what everyone has ever thought. She's been given a mission that has changed her from a twenty three year old business woman to a sixteen year old newbie at the Academy of Rosailia Stark. But, she might not be the only exception.
This is awesome! It's been in my library for a while and I decided to check it out. Glad I did :) I love the concept and can't wait to read more of it :) Nice work. +1 vote
This really captured me and it made me want to know how Aston is in her life and is he the one wanting her dead. It gets me thinking and I like that.
The whole car scene was beautifully written with a lot of detail... voted! I'm excited for the next chapter :)
Interesting start. I loved the description of the car hitting and dragging her. I didn't see any errors. Your spelling and grammar looked impeccable. Props on this prologue. I can't wait to read on when there is more (:
                                    Oh and- Audrey Hepburn May 4th, 1929
* correction: Hope you write more soon, I was disappointed when I didnt find any more too read XD
I really love this idea so please update soon! Also, great description of the crash:)