In the distant future the British Governement have hatched a plan to create a Perfect Human race. Brainwashing takes place in a mysterious room, and curious Alice wants to find out more...
interesting, but she should have known what she was getting into and had a better plan than knocking and annoying these powerful people. But I do like the idea.
@MintyPen Wow. Thank you very much! I will be adding more, so stay tuned!
@Gaagoo Thank you very much. I hadn't planned to extend it, but a few people have suggested that. So I'm considering it :)
This is gr8. Needs to be longer though, KEEP WRITING. r u gonna write another chapter?????????? BTW i voted
Thats pretty awesome dude..
I do think if you just extended it, added more suspense and drama it would be totally rocking.. It just seemed too short to be truly gripping you know? :,)