Perfect Human

Perfect Human

1.2K Reads 27 Votes 1 Part Story
Kirsty Turnbull By moonshoes12 Updated Feb 22, 2011

In the distant future the British Governement have hatched a plan to create a Perfect Human race. Brainwashing takes place in a mysterious room, and curious Alice wants to find out more...

lylli4jello lylli4jello Feb 26, 2011
interesting, but she should have known what she was getting into and had a better plan than knocking and annoying these powerful people. But I do like the idea.
moonshoes12 moonshoes12 Feb 24, 2011
@MintyPen Wow. Thank you very much! I will be adding more, so stay tuned!
moonshoes12 moonshoes12 Feb 23, 2011
@Gaagoo Thank you very much. I hadn't planned to extend it, but a few people have suggested that. So I'm considering it :)
Gaagoo Gaagoo Feb 23, 2011
This is gr8. Needs to be longer though, KEEP WRITING. r u gonna write another chapter?????????? BTW i voted
HazzyKeene HazzyKeene Feb 22, 2011
Thats pretty awesome dude.. 
                              I do think if you just extended it, added more suspense and drama it would be totally rocking.. It just seemed too short to be truly gripping you know? :,)
HazzyKeene HazzyKeene Feb 22, 2011
Thats pretty awesome dude.. 
                              I do think if you just extended it, added more suspense and drama it would be totally rocking.. It just seemed too short to be truly gripping you know? :,)