When Jenn Kisses Damien she immediately falls for him But does he like her like she likes him. Why would he Just kiss her like that and then walk away!?!?!
Thank you but i decided to change it up a little what do you think? im so excited for you guys to read it
I agree with the other two comments. There's a lot of run-on sentences. Also, don't use text acronyms like OMG and FML, because it's then like you're texting, and not writing a story.
But it's a good plot. Just make sure to edit.
i agree... but i definetly think you have somthing good starting here... keep writing and i will keep reading!
ummmm, interesting. I like your plot, but u hav run-on sentences. mayb u cud uhhh, make a rollercoaster relationship go on. just a guess.