My Kind of Perfect (One Shot)

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modernongbettyboop By modernongbettyboop Completed
What happens when an aniticipated happy occassion turns in to a nightmare?
     
    She was waiting for him will all her heart. He was looking for excuses to break the bad news to her.
     
    "I know he’s been coming home quite late recently because of a project which is due soon. But he promised to be home sooner today"......Gail
     
    "I know we promised each other to keep no secrets but I have faltered on that promise as well, and for that I hope one day you can forgive me".... Aaron
i think the story is cute. it was a perfect situation, way too perfect.  the way you write is ok, few gramm errors, but i'm sure u can fix them. i suggest you read more english novels and write more english pieces just so you can get the hang of it. u shud write more! =)
i think the story is cute. it was a perfect situation, way too perfect.  the way you write is ok, few gramm errors, but i'm sure u can fix them. i suggest you read more english novels and write more english pieces just so you can get the hang of it. u shud write more! =)
i think the story is cute. it was a perfect situation, way too perfect.  the way you write is ok, few gramm errors, but i'm sure u can fix them. i suggest you read more english novels and write more english pieces just so you can get the hang of it. u shud write more! =)
i think the story is cute. it was a perfect situation, way too perfect.  the way you write is ok, few gramm errors, but i'm sure u can fix them. i suggest you read more english novels and write more english pieces just so you can get the hang of it. u shud write more! =)
i think the story is cute. it was a perfect situation, way too perfect.  the way you write is ok, few gramm errors, but i'm sure u can fix them. i suggest you read more english novels and write more english pieces just so you can get the hang of it. u shud write more! =)
i think the story is cute. it was a perfect situation, way too perfect.  the way you write is ok, few gramm errors, but i'm sure u can fix them. i suggest you read more english novels and write more english pieces just so you can get the hang of it. u shud write more! =)