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Scars of the Past

Scars of the Past

4.6K Reads 156 Votes 18 Part Story
Wendy By EmberTora354 Completed

Fraye is the delta wolf of her pack, the pup of the alphas. But she isn't REALLY their pup, but was adopted long ago, found bleeding in the snow with a missing eye. Now all she has left to remember her past are scars over where her eye should be. One day, a mysterious wolf tells her something that sends her on a quest to find out everything of her past; and get revenge on the one who tore out her eye.

Aww, poor puppy! Who could hurt a pup? (Can't wait to find out who XD ) 
                              So far I love the flow of the story. You set up the background of the story really well, and gave enough description where you feel like you are there, and following Fraye's  footsteps. Can't wait to read more!