Make a bargain for love? Be careful what you wish for...because what the devil delivers may not be the man you remember. Co-authored with "Kellie".
I really love the title. When I saw it, it already caught my attention. xx
Very intense start :D but that's why I love it :) Your have an amazing talent for writing!
A really intense start. It definitely draws the readers in. Most of your writing flows nicely, which is good. Overall, a good job! Keep writing (:
This was really well written. It flows which is great considering the subject matter. And I'm really interested to see how the summary fits in here... Keep up the good work!
Oh geez, that was intense. I like how you started off with the action and the conflict immediately, and you write very well. The plot's been set up well, and overall, I really enjoyed what I read. Great work -- I look forward to seeing more. :)
Very interesting, and the writing is pretty good. Keep it up. owob