The story of a warrior and his brother as they leave there village for the first time this is my first anime story.
Chapter 3 is a great stop point! :D People wanna know a nest from what? :) I would think they wouldnt wanna shoot arrows at Kiyoshi if he is their warrior or they would respect his wishes! :3 Great story so far! :D
I like how you helped us pronounce the names and your a good writer great job (:
I think it's so cute on how you wrote down how to pronounce the names :P And It's nice that it's an adventure story :D
well i have to say that this is the first story i have ever read that had more than one chapter in each i like that its unique and so is this story i really do think this is great *Voted*
Mm, I'm not used to these kind of stories. But the action is incredible! Also, like everyone has said, you could use some more... unique words. Overall, it's very good. :]
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