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Vengeance pt.1

Vengeance pt.1

9.5K Reads 299 Votes 7 Part Story
Gorillo1 By Gorillo1 Updated Nov 01, 2011

The story of a warrior and his brother as they leave there village for the first time this is my first anime story.

AriaNAhmer AriaNAhmer Sep 10, 2012
Chapter 3 is a great stop point! :D People wanna know a nest from what? :) I would think they wouldnt wanna shoot arrows at Kiyoshi if he is their warrior or they would respect his wishes! :3 Great story so far! :D
Lovely143 Lovely143 Apr 17, 2012
I like how you helped us pronounce the names and your a good writer great job (:
TashaNicoleHearts TashaNicoleHearts Apr 16, 2012
I think it's so cute on how you wrote down how to pronounce the names :P And It's nice that it's an adventure story :D
Apeezy574 Apeezy574 Mar 29, 2012
well i have to say that this is the first story i have ever read that had more than one chapter in each i like that its unique and so is this story i really do think this is great *Voted*
SocialButterfly21 SocialButterfly21 Nov 06, 2011
Mm, I'm not used to these kind of stories. But the action is incredible! Also, like everyone has said, you could use some more... unique words. Overall, it's very good. :]