I have a choice either to become a vampire,demon,werewolf,angel, ghost,or stay human, 5 drop dead gorgeous guys are in love with me and want me to be theirs for eternity. Can I make my decision in the 7months I have left to live?
OMG see when I read 5 guys, I thought it would be One Direction and I was like- NOOOOOOO!! :O
Author's Note is too long and disorganized. The story was written nicely without major errors. Some minor re-editing might need to be in session though. The characters are also interesting. Overall, this is a nice read. ^^
You have a few grammar mistakes but this doesn't stop me from reading! (:
I love your cast, and this is a very nice start! (:
I really like it, keep it up! ((:
@Darkness94 the hot guy is supposed to be Aidan but without a shirt, but for the story pretend he has a shirt lol :)
PERIODS!!!!!! I'm really sorry. but it's been bugging me a TON! You need periods at the end of your sentences!!!!! But other than that, it was well written!
omg i love this!!! Such a gret story line!!! Definately voting :)